Simple first map does not meet quality requirements

[digitalhead]

I've uploaded screenshots to an imageshack album:
http://yfrog.com/dy20101210235554acprisonijx

And the map to my own web host:
< TBA >

Please excuse the graphical quality of the map, it's a rough draft and most of the textures are just to let me know what is what.

Edit: it appears that my host didn't like what I did with that folder, I'll get something else figured out...