ac_zaila

[c00kie]

My First Map (: You can Download Here. I new mapper so idk if this is right file but this is my last BAK file. BAK Download

Pickups:

1 | Kelvar vest
1 | helmet
2 | granade
4 | ammo box
3 | health
3 | pistol amo
1 | akimbo

Enjoy:



PS: Melone helps me with Clips, thx so much.

[Lantry]

The file you want to upload is the .cgz file (and the .cfg, if you have one). The .BAK will work if people rename it to .cgz, but it won't be the right version of your map.
EDIT: woops, didn't see that you had uploaded the .cgz. You don't need the .bak

[Viper]

First, I refuse to download any file from a site like the one you used. Instead upload to http://www.akimbo.in (i know its down right now but for future reference) or definitely to http://www.quadropolis.us . If you must upload it somewhere else than try http://www.box.net or http://www.mediafire.com for a better file host.

Second. After I downloaded it anyways since i was bored I noticed:

1) Your file structure is not correct. You only included the .cgz in your upload. No one wants to manually place the file. We want a package that is automatically executable from the AC directory for our convenience.

To do this (I'd give you akimbo's page but they're down):

Make a .zip file with the structure:

packages/maps/"map file/s"

2) The map itself is a fine first attempt but tbh it's bad. You only used white lights, and texture choice is bad, not to mention layout. You included 2 tree mapmodels and a variety of others in this small map, which cause lag on lower end systems, so try to keep the high-poly mapmodels low in the future. All in all, it sucks but hey, everyone's first map does.

Keep up mapping and you'll get better. Look to the works of other great mappers for inspiration and don't give up!

[c00kie]

Thx sugestions Viper.

i know isnt a very good map =/ , but i think is very nice for the first map.

My next map will be better (;

[Viper]

Good luck c00kie! :D

[Bukz]

Looks like you've learned a lot about it all already c00kie, quite good for a first attempt I must say. Keep up the good work, looking forward to seeing your future maps. :D

[c00kie]

thx Bukz, i started my new map today (:

[YourSister]

well, i must admit i like that map, is simple and very fast to play

[Frogulis]

c00kie: as said above, this isn't the best map, but it could be soooo much worse. It's not 10000000 cubes high and it isn't called ZAILA_BY_C00KIE_LOL!!!!!!X5_OMNOMNOMNOM_SNIPERFORT@##
You get points for that :)
Keep working and I hope to see more maps from you some time!

[c00kie]

@Sister: Thx (:

@Frogulis : thx man, maybe in 2 weeks i post my new map.

[Ronald_Reagan]

It better not be titled

ZAILA_BY_C00KIE_LOL!!!!!!X5_OMNOMNOMNOM_SNIPERFORT@##

[#M|A#Wolf]

The colors... my eyes....

Nice map! You've got potential, keep going.

[c00kie]

thx Wolf =)

[Duckett]

Nice map. a little too small for my liking though, great detail!