ac_civic

[Pi_Halo]

I just want to say that for a 3 day map, this is a solid map. There is a good flow, the lights and pickups are good. I just would like to see some different variation throughout the map as far as detail goes. Also the similarity between the two bases should be fixed. They both have similar design elements (like the thing behind the fence), the only real way they differ is texture alone. Other then that, I got a few screenshots of some minor issues. All in all, its a solid map that needs little to no work to improve and should play well in game.

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In the screenshot above, I don't feel as if those 2 textures fit the theme. I would change the white to the older looking white brick and that unusual red to something more fitting of red brick pattern. The colours are fine, its just the brick pattern isn't.


Having 2 similar things collide, such as above, is something that bothers me. The two tiles are similar and they don't have a reason for changing, they just change. Give them a reason for changing and it should be fine, just don't end one right into the other.

Edit: Overall this map is about a 7 out 10 or slightly better. I would like to see you try a map for the contest. You have plenty of time to work on it and I think you would do surprisingly well in the contest. I hope you don't take my words to rough, I'm only trying to provide quality feedback to fellow mappers!