Needs more deep bass.
And I found the pause between the build-up and the drop to be too long (you don't have to shorten it though, you could add something in it just before the drop). Other than that, that wasn't bad. :)
Listen to some stuff by Arkasia (particularly New World Disorder and Fall of the Republic). Should give you some inspiration.
And I found the pause between the build-up and the drop to be too long (you don't have to shorten it though, you could add something in it just before the drop). Other than that, that wasn't bad. :)
Listen to some stuff by Arkasia (particularly New World Disorder and Fall of the Republic). Should give you some inspiration.