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I just want to point out a few pros and cons. The pickups is the biggest worry, but that has already been mentioned by a few previous people. So i will point out a few other things. I will list the cons first, cause I like leaving on good news.
In the screenshot above I wanted to address the tiles (though this will be listed as a pro as well). My issue with it is that there are 3 different styling methods that the tiles go through during the map. Though this wouldn't be a huge issue if they were similar methods, but however, they are not. Also the detail of making loose or broken tiles could have been done better.
In this screenshot, I wanted to point out that certain areas were empty or bland. Filling them with detail could improve the overall look of things and make it feel better.
As I said above, the tiles had some good moments, such as listed above. There were good areas and bad areas. This area was sold good with a decent amount of map filler. I would suggest doing similar things throughout the map.
Other then the mass of pickups in this area, this for me was the best part of the map. Had decent quality, some good elevation change, and just overall flowed nice. I wouldn't change much here other then the pickups and slightly more detail (not overboard).
Overall I would rank the map a 6 out of 10. Its just small things like detail, pickups, and maybe even some more drastic lights and some sounds here and there. Other then that it was a solid layout and a solid theme. Good job