22 Jan 12, 03:51AM
I see what you were going for. After the first drop, when your bass comes in I can hear you trying for a warble bass, but it sounds like you're only using one filter? You should use two: a subfilter and a mid/low filter that you modulate with the LFO.
I like the drum beat after 1:59, but before that those bass drums hits are just kind of silly (not to be offensive, but that's just the first word that comes to mind)
I dig the hook too, it's a pretty novel motif. But you should try to variate your sound more. General rule of thumb: every eight bars you should add a new element or metamorphosize an existing one.
Other than that, not bad for a first song. Keep working hard, bud.
Also, it's pretty genre-less right now. It needs more defining elements to have a genre :)
I like the drum beat after 1:59, but before that those bass drums hits are just kind of silly (not to be offensive, but that's just the first word that comes to mind)
I dig the hook too, it's a pretty novel motif. But you should try to variate your sound more. General rule of thumb: every eight bars you should add a new element or metamorphosize an existing one.
Other than that, not bad for a first song. Keep working hard, bud.
Also, it's pretty genre-less right now. It needs more defining elements to have a genre :)