[Now improved] Could somebody rate my mapmodel?

[a_slow_old_man]

Alright, you asked for it ;)

First of: Nice idea :)

But:
- the animation (when the drop gets back up) appears to be a tad to slow, because if you concentrate, you can see it fly back up, so if possible make the step from under the floor up to the shower just one frame or maybe just half a frame (best would be less than that)
- The drop is to clear blue. Water isnt realy blue as you will know ;)
Try to make it a but greenish and maybe halftransparent (idk if thats possible at ac, but if not, just make a brush where every 2. or 3. pixel is selceted and use it to make it look half-transparent-alike)
- The Shower: There are some messed up spaces, you'll see at the picture.
Try to make a seam along the red line, to avoid such seams :)

Also maybe make the neck more round. Maybe 1 to 3 subdivdes more :)




I hope this is what you wanted ;)

PS. next time you can send me a PM ^^