17 Sep 15, 03:58PM
If you're sharing it around, I'd recommend seeing how it's received on /r/AussieHipHop.
Seems well produced overall, doesn't seem as clean as it could be but overall, incredible for an indie (I haven't dug as deeply as I could have into production so I can't give you any tips or anything lol). Your style can take a little while to get used to but that's fine. Lyrics are overall solid, there's a lot of indie rappers where you can just guess what they're going to use next because they're so generic, and while I get those vibes here from time to time ('time' and 'rhymed', oh god), it didn't pop up too often. And you don't really use some form of 'motherfucking' to fill in gaps in your flow, thank fuck. I don't think I'd bump the shit out of this, but I can see myself listening to it every now and then in the future. Nicely done.
(I've listened to a bit more now, and some feedback I can give is that you can be a bit hard to understand when you're singing, not sure if that was your singing or if it was a production thing. Also, as for lyrics, an imperfect rhyme every now and then is fine, but in some of these tracks you pile on a few of them consecutively and it can be a bit jarring. Just some feedback for the future. c: )
Seems well produced overall, doesn't seem as clean as it could be but overall, incredible for an indie (I haven't dug as deeply as I could have into production so I can't give you any tips or anything lol). Your style can take a little while to get used to but that's fine. Lyrics are overall solid, there's a lot of indie rappers where you can just guess what they're going to use next because they're so generic, and while I get those vibes here from time to time ('time' and 'rhymed', oh god), it didn't pop up too often. And you don't really use some form of 'motherfucking' to fill in gaps in your flow, thank fuck. I don't think I'd bump the shit out of this, but I can see myself listening to it every now and then in the future. Nicely done.
(I've listened to a bit more now, and some feedback I can give is that you can be a bit hard to understand when you're singing, not sure if that was your singing or if it was a production thing. Also, as for lyrics, an imperfect rhyme every now and then is fine, but in some of these tracks you pile on a few of them consecutively and it can be a bit jarring. Just some feedback for the future. c: )