20 Feb 13, 07:31AM
but the art of the mappers might fill it up True words right there, expect for the might. Its all "art" after all right, made by you and is unique.
Like I said before one of the parts I enjoy bout your map is the bases they have decent layouts/desgin. I really enjoy the overall feel of the map, and all the cropped detail you have going on. The outside part of the map is probably my least favorite part if I had to pick, a weird part is on the part were your going down the stairs the wall outside of that, with the big flat rectangle in the wall the ones on the opposite side of the map work because of the lined textures you used but not that one. Also where those strips are the palette with 4 barrels on it seems pretty oddly placed right in front of a walkway/tunnel..since you have that ladder to no where you might as well put it infront of that more since doesn't matter, I'd even take of the ladder enity you don't need it. And I know I was annoyed the 2 times I went up there only to see nothing and hope back down ;) kinda pointless.
Also about the light, like others said it can be inporved a little. But what you have I like its not bad, your map is mostly grey textures(prison) so I think the use of the colored lights help break that up. That being said use it suttle and sparingly..your you've got to really think about complementary colors and the overall tone.
Is the part with the cobble stone suppose to be outside outside of the prison? If it is probably shouldn't be able to see people being hung from outside the prison. And if its not then the part with the small blockade might as well be a fence with barbed wire(only for realism's shitty sake) at the moment the white thing seems kinda out of place and you've already got nice wall designs I think repeating would work better. Also bug on the top of the stairs near RVSF flag, unless intentional.
It was really hard to think of things that I didn't like or think were good in this map, 93% of this map is very interesting just a few area's like the really narrow walkways..and maybe the hall with absolutely noting could use some work..you could just add a private sell in that hall so its not so plain.
Again, great map. Your already a great mapper SrPER$IAN I hope you keep them coming.
Like I said before one of the parts I enjoy bout your map is the bases they have decent layouts/desgin. I really enjoy the overall feel of the map, and all the cropped detail you have going on. The outside part of the map is probably my least favorite part if I had to pick, a weird part is on the part were your going down the stairs the wall outside of that, with the big flat rectangle in the wall the ones on the opposite side of the map work because of the lined textures you used but not that one. Also where those strips are the palette with 4 barrels on it seems pretty oddly placed right in front of a walkway/tunnel..since you have that ladder to no where you might as well put it infront of that more since doesn't matter, I'd even take of the ladder enity you don't need it. And I know I was annoyed the 2 times I went up there only to see nothing and hope back down ;) kinda pointless.
Also about the light, like others said it can be inporved a little. But what you have I like its not bad, your map is mostly grey textures(prison) so I think the use of the colored lights help break that up. That being said use it suttle and sparingly..your you've got to really think about complementary colors and the overall tone.
Is the part with the cobble stone suppose to be outside outside of the prison? If it is probably shouldn't be able to see people being hung from outside the prison. And if its not then the part with the small blockade might as well be a fence with barbed wire(only for realism's shitty sake) at the moment the white thing seems kinda out of place and you've already got nice wall designs I think repeating would work better. Also bug on the top of the stairs near RVSF flag, unless intentional.
It was really hard to think of things that I didn't like or think were good in this map, 93% of this map is very interesting just a few area's like the really narrow walkways..and maybe the hall with absolutely noting could use some work..you could just add a private sell in that hall so its not so plain.
Again, great map. Your already a great mapper SrPER$IAN I hope you keep them coming.