07 Dec 12, 02:05AM
(06 Dec 12, 10:52PM)Z3R0 Wrote: Very nice map, lots of nice details. A little bland in colour texture and lights wise, but nothing too bad. Though, you pickups could do with some improvement, 7 helmets and 6 armour? Even ac_shine has 3 helmets and 2 vests and ac_iceroad 4 helmets and 1 armour. 7 & 6 is a little too much. If you reconsidered the pickups, this could be a really nice map to play. :)
Z3R0 has a really good point. Also, I figured out why that post was floating. It was in the wall. My suggestion is to remove that fence post, and move the clip one cube closer (so people don't run into that part of the fence and possibly get stuck).
Another thing (which I fixed for myself), is you missed another box and gave it a wooden floor texture... x'D Same area as the last time.
Keep mapping! I'd love to see more of your work!