10 Oct 12, 09:22PM
(This post was last modified: 10 Oct 12, 09:23PM by DogDancing.)
This is not a bad map, that's for sure...it actually looks kinda fun for osok or dm too. But like some other people said what stands out right away is the brightness of the map, the lights are not very good and quite bright.
Also the textures add to the effect, because they are so saturated/bright already...did u make these textures? You need to really desaturated them for them to look ok, at the moment its almost a pain to look at em.
I'd also say just delete the little room with the helmet in it, no reason for it...some of the things seem strange and not needed. While a lot of the map seems empty. You should just delete the flags if your not going to add team spawns as well.
Keep working on it man, and making new maps! You've got potential!
Also the textures add to the effect, because they are so saturated/bright already...did u make these textures? You need to really desaturated them for them to look ok, at the moment its almost a pain to look at em.
I'd also say just delete the little room with the helmet in it, no reason for it...some of the things seem strange and not needed. While a lot of the map seems empty. You should just delete the flags if your not going to add team spawns as well.
Keep working on it man, and making new maps! You've got potential!