Pweaks you were taught to play guitar by a famous Finnish death metaller yes? I think I remember talking to you about that on a map you made.
The music is 'pro' sounding. Im not so much into metal now but I can hear that the guitar and drum work are quality. Vocals seem slightly out of place, I don't think the technique you mentioned works. Sounds a bit like a poor Dani Filth in places, but obviously better than Dani Filth nowadays. Your vocalist should stick to the low pitched vocals imo or use a different method for the shrieks and then you guys really have something going. As I say though I'm not into metal and particularly not death metal at all now, so perhaps the kind of vocals your singer uses are what most people will like.
From a songwriting song point I like how the drums aren't just bang bang bang bang bang all the way through which I always hated listening to metal, how boring is that? Perhaps melodic sections would work well although that might sound wimpy or it mightn't fit that kind of music.
The music is 'pro' sounding. Im not so much into metal now but I can hear that the guitar and drum work are quality. Vocals seem slightly out of place, I don't think the technique you mentioned works. Sounds a bit like a poor Dani Filth in places, but obviously better than Dani Filth nowadays. Your vocalist should stick to the low pitched vocals imo or use a different method for the shrieks and then you guys really have something going. As I say though I'm not into metal and particularly not death metal at all now, so perhaps the kind of vocals your singer uses are what most people will like.
From a songwriting song point I like how the drums aren't just bang bang bang bang bang all the way through which I always hated listening to metal, how boring is that? Perhaps melodic sections would work well although that might sound wimpy or it mightn't fit that kind of music.