19 Jul 11, 04:32PM
Xenith.net published one of my short stories. Check it out here:
http://www.xenith.net/xenithmag/matthew-...cing-alone
http://www.xenith.net/xenithmag/matthew-...cing-alone
Hey, check out my story.
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19 Jul 11, 04:32PM
Xenith.net published one of my short stories. Check it out here:
http://www.xenith.net/xenithmag/matthew-...cing-alone
19 Jul 11, 04:49PM
Cool story bro.
I should probably get around to reading it.
19 Jul 11, 06:45PM
19 Jul 11, 11:03PM
Lol. I actually read that, although... I was kind of expecting something that's uhh... Idk how to explain... Hmm, what was the significance of the scissors?
Anyways, for you who hasn't bothered reading it, or just think it's tl;dr. Basically it's about a couple who live in an apartment, and they go to the bar each night; the girl dances in the bar, with men "tasting" her with their eyes, then they go back to their apartment and have sex.
19 Jul 11, 11:32PM
The scissors are what he used to cut the vines off the fence. Or, I guess he settled on a knife.
The vines are probably a symbol of the problems that have overgrown his life. The story is about him recognizing that he has gotten into a rut and is desperate to get out of it.
20 Jul 11, 12:30AM
Thanks for the comments, I can't express how good it feels to have people read my work.
V-Man, you genius! XD
Literature is my worst subject in school. :| Oh and @fernando, you're welcome :)
23 Jul 11, 10:53AM
hi the story is nice
23 Jul 11, 06:49PM
I havent read it but its nice.
24 Jul 11, 07:09AM
Nice work. I'm working on a piece at the moment with a friend (doing the I write one piece, she completes the next). Maybe I'll post it when we're done and consider submitting it somewhere. Congrats on getting something on the interweb.
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