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06 Jan 12, 10:44PM
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ac_forgotten
Hai everyone,

I enjoy mapping and as a result a map was crafted by me. I would like to have some critics on my map. All kinds of critics are welcome. I map because i like it, but of course also to become a better mapper and to let others have fun on my maps. Therefore i need your criticisms. You can download my map+cgz file from the link below. (a screen can be viewed there as well)

http://akimbo.in/forum/viewtopic.php?t=1082&f=32

Stay on your camping spot and thanks in advance;)
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06 Jan 12, 10:48PM
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RE: ac_forgotten
Good Job Dude :P
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07 Jan 12, 12:49AM
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RE: ac_forgotten
Such a good job for your first released map, YWC <3 GJ!
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07 Jan 12, 01:08AM
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RE: ac_forgotten
Never knew you mapped :D
I check it out later!!!
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07 Jan 12, 01:16AM
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I just forgot to thank the people that gave me helpful advices and critics. In particular the guys from FD, Z3R0, thanks for helping with the rock textures, and last but not least Snoosnoo who followed the progress critically, thanks guys :D
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07 Jan 12, 01:21AM
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RE: ac_forgotten
[Image: 20120106210335acforgott.jpg]

Der we go. <33
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07 Jan 12, 01:22AM
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RE: ac_forgotten
That's one nice lookin' screenie.
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07 Jan 12, 01:25AM
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RE: ac_forgotten
DAYUM!
Lookin' fresh.
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07 Jan 12, 02:27AM
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RE: ac_forgotten
Looks good. Keep up the good work.
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07 Jan 12, 09:37PM
Post: #10
RE: ac_forgotten
Looks awesome with the new skymap and the rock looks a lot better. I like the layout and there's lots of detailing, very nice :) I love the texturing in this map.

Very nice, gj gj, keep up the good work.
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08 Jan 12, 02:54AM
Post: #11
RE: ac_forgotten
Nice map, I like it ;)
Just one point, if I were you I'd change the water color...
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08 Jan 12, 03:03AM
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(08 Jan 12 02:54AM)sniperz Wrote:  Nice map, I like it ;)
Just one point, if I were you I'd change the water color...

If i were you I'd change the 4th value of the water colour...:D
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08 Jan 12, 03:14AM
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RE: ac_forgotten
True.
... For more transparency
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08 Jan 12, 09:58AM
Post: #14
RE: ac_forgotten
it's funny :)
nice map job like i told you the last time...
but :P
you still seem to have forgotten (a bit of irony here :D) to clip something i've shown you :) you can rifle jump on a grey wall for which you said'll be clipped or made higher ;)
you can nade-jump on the same wall from the other end too :P
otherwise it's very nice :)
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08 Jan 12, 12:47PM
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RE: ac_forgotten
Thanks everyone. :D
@Sniperz and Exoduss: In the beginning I made it even more colourfull but i guess its more realistic to add very little colour to the water. The 4th value means that I should put +4 watercolour of blue/green?
@Milandrag:
Yes, for some reason I lost that clip in another copy of this map. I guess i continued with a version that didnt have it anymore. I only found out yesterday that the clip wasnt there. I will add it;) thanks for pointing that out :D
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